Love Salad

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by marquis_de_odde, Dec 13, 2005.

  1. marquis_de_odde

    marquis_de_odde Member

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    And this is equisite agony
    My lips twitch longingly
    As I drift to moment's past
    Recalling softly stolen fragments

    As eyes become hazy
    My mind trips into ecstatic territory
    Gleaming with a hunger
    Soon to be fullfilled

    Touch,taste and smell seem vivid
    Yet it's still all a psyche mirage
    So I must excersize extreme patience
    While longing for another encounter

    Even in these twilight hours
    My skin drips electric energy
    Pulsating on the instant
    Inching ever closer
    When all these permeating thoughts
    Recieve substance

    This current of frenzy
    Does not simply lay on the physical plane
    I feel it deeper than anything I've ever known
    Thirsty for gallons of knowledge
    Pausing for a moment to catch my breathe

    Spirals of light whizz past the clouds
    In baritone vibrations I can sense acceptance
    Equally doled out portions
    The origin of this hectic ecstasy
     
  2. lithiumandweed

    lithiumandweed Member

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    very beautiful
     
  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Yes, sensual, emotional and spiritual...
    an erotic dreamscape opens up more &
    more with each revisiting glance.

    The mixing passions blend,
    sweeping attention into currents
    of feeling and perception.

    A wonderful title speaks volumes,
    while the readers efforts to grasp
    the message seed night journeys.
     
  4. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    yes, your title is very captivating and your use of beautiful words is amazing as well. nice poem. :) I'll look for more of yours on here.

    --luv mj
     
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