Love at Six O'Clock

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ripple23, Mar 16, 2006.

  1. ripple23

    ripple23 Member

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    The sun that sinks between us has given
    you a new name.
    We who alone know the total flood of a life
    that assaults with its secrets.

    Those curtains that assail you
    at the balcony of your tempered dreams
    give way almost nightly
    to the retreating winds caught in your hair

    and I saw amidst your falling soul
    the ocean, that kept me with its confidence.
    For what wonders it has drunk,
    the sea will keep you company.
     
  2. Icurus

    Icurus Member

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    This was a very good read,
    only if felt a bit waned, in the end, as in like a rollor
    coster ride, it failed me in a last second before the end
    complete roll before stopping.....
    if you catch my drift...
    all and all a good piece,
    Thanks,
    Devon Knight ~
     
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