Yeah this poem was one I sent in to a nationwide contest and it placed in the top 10 of my state. Thought I'd post to get some feedback on it. Nothing special but here it is. Carry me away To a world of Silence and waves Far from the world of today Wind passes through Creating sensations As if floating within A world of color and clues Molding perspective Through experience And discovery of all That is directed Taken into unknown Regions of the mind Forever lost to memory Just left within the zone
