look below where they play

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by umbra, Aug 30, 2005.

  1. umbra

    umbra Member

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    up
    on a mountain i stood
    Looking at the things below.
    Only the sombre glare of empty plastic.
    d r a g g i n g
    in
    the
    wind.
    Visionaries
    had lost their sight .

     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    below where they play, or below where they weep, and die? This one's deep, nice job.
     
  3. umbra

    umbra Member

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    plastic people with plastic thoughts, they never now what it means to weep and to die, its all a game to be played, and the one who laughs best laughs last.
    Thanks
     
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