life

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by thcinfectedhair, May 26, 2007.

  1. life through my eyes..

    Suicide is a likely topic for my mind
    to choose and it likes to crucify and creep up from behind
    visions of paranoia cripple me feeble
    and the cycle always seems to meander
    god took my angelic descender

    solace is it really worth a loathing memory?
    Silence is it inconsequential to the thoughts in my brain?
    I cant remember if Im feeling or just imagining all this pain
    I ‘m truly cocooned in my life’s bane

    the rain can be glistened and stained
    in a brain
    my tongue is split in half
    its odd im numb to the pain
    wish I could feel through the walls
    of insane
    I bet its so fucking comforting being
    sane

    any vision or memory of my life has faded
    sounds come from my mouth and I don’t speak
    my eyes are always jaded
    tongue numb and cold
    emotion never seems to have a protective fold
    im collapsing collapsing
    relapsing all lunacy

    I am always uneven
    and I can always hear them
    ignoring hunger is anorexic
    delirium psychosis im fucking catatonic
    cradling such a disease causes mental strain
    I like to burden my own children
    maybe loneliness is mastication so I can ascertain
    unfetter me from all this disturbing rapture

    the rain can be glistened and stained
    in a brain
    my tongue is split in half
    its odd im numb to the pain
    wish I could feel through the walls
    of insane
    I bet its so fucking comforting being
    sane
    life is a facade that im masquerading
    life is a subliminal meaning
    life is something worth mutilating
     
  2. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

    Interesting. I like it :)
     
  3. madcap

    madcap Member

    hmm great imagery, well done
     
  4. myself

    myself just me

    not bad. actually, not bad at all. i like it.
     
  5. thanks, means a lot man.
     
  6. SweetMarie

    SweetMarie Member

    Wow, very nice...Very nice indeed!
     

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