life just isn't the same

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by inbloom, Sep 10, 2005.

  1. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    my heart hurts so much, it could burst.
    from the pain of things i've done, the worst.
    i've given you a reason to push me aside,
    and for that i feel like i've already died.

    life just isn't the same without your touch,
    and the smile you gave me every day.
    i hurt from the pain of these things too much,
    and there's so much i never got a chance to say.

    i walk through the rain, my clothes are soaked.
    it hurt so bad this morning, i almost choked.
    my throat closed up, and i couldn't breathe.
    my eyes fogged over, i couldn't see...

    life just isn't the same without your smile,
    and the way you feel cuddled up to me.
    for you, i'd gladly cross every mile,
    just to wake up with you next to me.

    i know i've hurt you, i know i've done wrong.
    with every mistake, i'll write another song
    hoping you'll forgive and see that i,
    can't live without you, alone i'll die.

    if you're done with me, i'll understand
    but with every day, i'm going to miss
    walking down the street, holding your hand
    pulling you close and giving you a kiss.

    i know i haven't done everything that i should,
    and i'm afraid that i've really lost you for good.
    but the only thing left that i can really do,
    is tell you i love you, and that i miss you...
     
  2. lucyinthesky

    lucyinthesky Tie Dyed Soul

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    HOW CUTE ARE YOU?!??!
     
  3. soulrebel51

    soulrebel51 i's a folkie.

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    sounds like something that Hoobastank would sing.
     
  4. Duck

    Duck quack. Lifetime Supporter

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    HAHAHAHA


    and whereas that may be true
    and I feel like a pussy for saying this, that thing was sweet as hell, dude if you receited that for me I'd fuckin' marry you
     
  5. Tralce

    Tralce Member

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    Jeez that is so sweet
     
  6. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    Hahaha, that's fuckin hilarious! It's great, because that day, as I left for the library, that stupid "the Reason" song was blaring out of my sister's stereo.

    HAHAHAHA!!! that gave me a good chuckle!! Hahaha. Well, hehe, glad you thought it was good. hehe.

    And Lucy, I'm especially glad you liked it...:&
     
  7. Lamby

    Lamby la vita รจ bella

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    very nice i like it alot:)
     
  8. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    aw bless you james. cute poem :)
     
  9. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    That was really powerful.
    I feel my passions clearly mirrored
    with your heartfelt words.
    You love with intensity. Great poem.
     
  10. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    this verse hits so close to home. i'm afraid we've all had that feeling!
     
  11. Negative red

    Negative red Member

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    Fight on man... the world is here for you.. Stone puppets
     
  12. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    Awww, thanks, you guys. Your words are very kind and inspiring. :)
     
  13. TheLittleOne

    TheLittleOne Senior Member

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    oooo what'd you do?
     
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