Just try it Before you wake up, After you wash your face. Take a look outside, Realize it’s a wonderful place Close your eyes, Take a deep breath. NO need to worry, About life or death. No rules to hold you back now You’re totally free. Sex, Drugs, and rock-n-Roll baby, that’s the way it should be!
I liked it until the last two lines. Not that there's anything wrong with those things (to a point), but it's so cliche, and I'm not sure that is really the point of life anyways.
It's a good poem, but I generally don't like the topic. Most of our world is a terrible place. I didn't like the last 2 lines either, sounded to cliche. Otherwise, it's a good poem.