this is my first post here for a poem.. its not my best, nor my worst. i just found this suitable for the moment i guess.. anyway, here you goo "listen" ..let these words touch you deeply; listen. this is not a threat, nor a speech for you to change your life. I'm just worried about what you're going through, and maybe one day you'll remember me for this... I guess all i can say is that you'll always have a friend in me. I will do my most for you, but you are going to have to ask.. ..are you listening to me? im talking for you; listen. there are emotions coming from my soul, see it in my eyes. look at me, my mouth. listen, im crying out to you. I hope you take these words to the heart.. by colt
nothing special i know. its a poem for those who feel like giving up. kind of like me.. hmm, i dunno, what do you think? its a bit ruff but its ok i guess. bah, take care guys. hope you liek it
Hello darling, I found your poem! You rock as a writer, I hope I can help you feel like you dont want to give up, please let me know how I can help. Your friend Kari
awww...you r sooo good..please continue posting..and as i've said before..plesa send me a message if you wanna talk, are feelig down or anything..luv
