Just something... but what is it

Discussion in 'The Whiners' started by Orsino2, Aug 31, 2004.

  1. Orsino2

    Orsino2 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    with blue green sky the daydream tree
    it holds it's hand out to me
    asking, asking, never again

    with silk on skin your gaze will take me
    when I started out I was blind
    should I even care anymore
    because sometimes I wonder
    about what the hell I am waiting for
    and it seems
    as if my veins are tributaries for the sun
    as I see which way the rivers flow

    surely they are seeping
    maybe I am going the wrong way
    drifting further from you

    and I ask myself
    why couldn't you have come my way
    maybe if you'd have been here
    but I guess I'm just a child

    maybe if I just wait a bit more...
     
  2. Orsino2

    Orsino2 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    Ugh... I feel sick...
     
  3. ImaginePeace1969

    ImaginePeace1969 Member

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    I really like your poetry :eek:) It's really nice to read - you're very good :eek:) Keep it up :eek:)

    Much Love
     
  4. Orsino2

    Orsino2 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    Umm... thanks... didn't realize anyone responded till now :p

    ~ George
     

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