just life

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by saffronfrancisburnet, May 26, 2005.

  1. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    for all within this world of life

    not noticed upon this earth so pure
    a body cold unnerved,yet wanting.
    you.. spoke of love inside your mind
    what hearts reveal may tremble
    passing by songs of passion now.
    to echo here in time alone,
    in this world somehow.
    ive swam in sorrow ,others too
    and followed hearts my dreams truth.
    shallow wishes ,sudden fright until
    the rays blast into our night.

    moan not for this,moments go
    a soul undone,shivers in cold.
    we know ourselves we know whats
    done...spoken bliss ,engraved to come.
    to echo again here in time,this page
    will turn ,a corner or two..
    ive burned in horror,memories flew
    and whispered softness ,skin of truth.
    loving tenderness,embraced moon shine
    for rays of glory,only shine.......
    half of our day within the light.....
    so let all fall,yet hold life with
    great might....


    thank you for reading
    lovenpeace from saff
    BE WHOLE........
     
  2. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    Good poem, saff. It flowed nicely :D
     
  3. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    hi there

    thank you moonjava..

    it took a long day of my 2 and half year old amber jade..

    to sit for a few mins to write this
    much is here
    the long darkness which of winter
    has passed
    the hours we gain
    and loose with age also
    for memories sometimes
    rise themselves
    to shock our souls
    into life....
    lovenpeace from saff
     
  4. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    *thumbs up*
     
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