just four little lines

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by teh-horace, Nov 9, 2006.

  1. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    when the moon of autumn's frail
    and the sun doth shine upon your head
    the breeze is light and smooths your skin
    the life you'll lead will not be lead



    -rdw 11/9/06
     
  2. RELAYER

    RELAYER mādhyamaka

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    This reminds me of that Tenacious D song Tribute : When the sun doth shine and the moon doth glow and the grass doth grow-oh!
     
  3. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    this is just a tribute, ya gotta believe me, said i wish you were there
     
  4. RELAYER

    RELAYER mādhyamaka

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    It's just a matter of opinion!

    Nah, the best part is And we played the first thing that came to our heads, just so happened to be, the best song in the world
     
  5. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    it was the greatest song in the world, look into my eyes and it's easy to see, one and one make two and two and one make three, it was destiny!
     
  6. Tuff Gong

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    hehehe.

    great peace man.
     
  7. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    four little lines
    of rhyme
    in time
    and space
    let's face it
    it's the fact
    no, don't erase it
    is it truth
    or dare
    do i care
    four little lines
    brilliantly there
     
  8. Musikero

    Musikero Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    Nicely done. :)
     
  9. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    thank you


    it just kinda fell out of my mouth



    or my fingertips
     
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