just a couple thoughts

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by jake.mobi, Sep 23, 2011.

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    lets walk down that red brick path
    these complex dynamics aren't middle school math


    a sinking sense of push and no pull
    a leaking tank will never read full


    and every yawning red sun is greeted with solemn resolution
    and every winking dusk sky is fleeing from moral destitution


    o not a shred nor fiber of consistent constitution
    the decisions made for me, but not devoid of delusion












    he gathers his things- his box his lunch his pole with rings
    he stops to observe a lark as it sings
    he hopes to find what he hopes to find-
    a love a dove a rose free of vine
    as he drops his line,
    he sings "I'll surely get mine"
    but as his brown bag, now empty, floats with the current,
    he realizes his ambition is his greatest deterrent










    whatcha think?

     
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