Isn't Love Enough?

Discussion in 'Music' started by Medici999, Sep 16, 2005.

  1. Medici999

    Medici999 Member

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    Hi,

    Here's a new song I wrote, I'd love some feedback from those of you interested, it's called...

    "Isn't It Enough?" (By Amadeo de' Medici)
    (Please Click Here to hear the "Hi-Fi" version on Soundclick.com,
    or go to www.soundclick.com/amadeodemedici)


    VERSE 1:

    I've run, out on faith,
    And I've run, pretty damn long,
    But I tried, yeah I tried,
    To prove my right from wrong,
    Still everything I'd do seemed to mean,
    Nothing to you,
    But I believed in you,


    CHORUS:

    Oh! Isn't, love, enough for you babe?
    Isn't, love, enough for you?
    Baby Blue,


    BRIDGE:

    So now I raise my glass to an empty chair,
    wonderin' if there would be somebody there,
    If i'd stayed inside my,
    Lucid dreams,
    My Fragile memories,
    My dreams of love and defeat!


    VERSE 2:

    And I don't got much to give,
    I know, Darlin',
    But I tried, yeah I tried, Oh, Oh!
    But now I, yeah I,
    Need something back from you!
    Ahh! I need you!


    CHORUS:

    And isn't, love, enough for you babe?
    Yeah isn't, love, enough for you?
    Isn't, love, enough for you?


    (©2005 By Amadeo de' Medici, ALL RIGHTS RESERVED!!! - Seriously!)
     
  2. soulrebel51

    soulrebel51 i's a folkie.

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    love songs are boring, man, for the most part.

    this one isn't an exception.

    try writing a love song where you talk about nothing but fruits from the grocery store, but you're really talking about loving your dog and/or your mother..

    now that'd be a good song.

    (in short: do something that isn't been done to death 5 million times a year)
     
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