island

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Digger168, Aug 16, 2005.

  1. Digger168

    Digger168 Member

    Alone, an Island I sit..........................
    No bridge connects to my shore.
    No wind brushes the hair of my palm trees
    Only sand to feel my way.

    Feet warmed in sunny solitude,
    waxing copious jade
    at hungry seagulls
    who know no shade.

    Thinking,......

    Wake me when I die.
    So at last, I can really see the sky,
    Heal the rain
    touch the Sun,...

    and forgive myself
    for forgetting what it was to be young.
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

    "Wake me when I die
    So at last, I can really see the sky"

    Wow. This poem is perfect.
     
  3. Digger168

    Digger168 Member

    thanks man,..

    I appreciate that.
    :)
     
  4. Weatherman

    Weatherman Member

    Seconded.
     
  5. Pirate Hippie

    Pirate Hippie Member

    I got the best vibes from those words, thanks.
     

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