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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by The Imaginary Being, Mar 14, 2011.

  1. The Imaginary Being

    The Imaginary Being PAIN IN ASS Lifetime Supporter

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    sausage
    dog
    on your face
    you are so mysterious
    it scares me so
    i like to eat melon

    the imaginary being
     
  2. wa bluska wica

    wa bluska wica Pedestrian

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    ^^^ forwarded this to the eisteddfod committee

    :crowngrin:
     
  3. thedope

    thedope glad attention Lifetime Supporter

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    Fucking fabulous
     
  4. OceanWalker

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  5. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    no points to award with this one
     
  6. OceanWalker

    OceanWalker Member

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    When I said "yee" I meant that I like it. However I think that the last line of this poem should be "the imaginary being", unless you were already implying that it was.. When I read this I end it with your name, because that's the way it reads. It flows well

    I could be wrong
     
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