In Search of the Simple Life

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by TrippinBTM, Oct 30, 2005.

  1. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    In Search of the Simple Life

    He was by grace and fortune born
    To wealth and peace in which to grow
    But with the years he grew forlorn
    And felt cut off from all life's flow

    Raised firmly in the church of God
    The dogma flowed, and hell seemed near
    But deep within came feelings odd
    A need to leave that world of fear

    So searching still he turned away
    From childhood faith and romanticism
    In worldly things he spent his days
    But only found antagonism

    Corrupt and angry people ruled
    And shallow lives were now the norm
    For lies were told and all were fooled
    And burning hearts had turned lukewarm

    Worthless world of work and toil,
    Empty praise to a distant God
    Both roads to him seemed all but spoiled
    Two wayward paths the weary plod

    And so he left to walk the mountains
    To merge himself with God's creation
    He drank his fill from those holy fountains
    And found at last his inspiration

    And decades later one could sight
    A mountain man who walked alone
    His beard was long and hair was white
    And peace like light from his eyes shone

    One day his breath merged with the breeze
    And in the hills was now never seen
    But the wind speaks of him in the trees
    And beckons all to a life serene
     
  2. Or's well

    Or's well Member

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    I especially like the final two stanza - oh to live the simple life where our dreams are uninfected.
     
  3. skyfire

    skyfire Member

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    i dont usually like poems that rhyme, most of them are trivial...but i really enjoyed this one, it was very well put together and it had very good imagry.
     
  4. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    thank you both for your comments
     
  5. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Sweet poem, excellent last stanza.
    Wow, its been a strange and wonderful year
    my friend...
     

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