In Between the Days

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by inbloom, Feb 12, 2006.

  1. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    I'd rather leave you with something
    to roll around your tounge,
    to taste,
    than to leave you high & dry.

    The bitter tang of ill advice
    still so fresh in your mouth,
    and clear in your eyes.

    Apathy, something that's lost on your
    head, in need of a slap in the face,
    you're faced,
    with your decisions turned three-fold.

    Maybe all we need is sleep,
    I'll bet he whispered,
    and you layed down first.

    But, the day-break will have the last word...
     
  2. Apples+Oranjes

    Apples+Oranjes Bekkasaur

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    hmmmm i like it.

    god, im sort of running out of words when it comes to your poetry, because you know i love it all....

    but ...i really like this one...... the vibe i get from it... i feel like i can relate
     
  3. FreeBird1969

    FreeBird1969 Fleas on their paws.

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    Ooooh. :eek: 'Tis very-nice. I, also, like the Vibe.
     
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