I'm a sucker

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by 20th_centry_fox, Feb 9, 2007.

  1. 20th_centry_fox

    20th_centry_fox Member

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    I'm such a sucker
    For falling back in love
    The last time i did
    My heart was broken
    But now with you its different
    And still I promised myself
    I wouldn't fall into loves hands
    But i guess this stupid holiday
    Has gotten me in the mood
    For love.

    I'm such a sucker
    For falling back in love
    Don't you dare break my heart
    But I know if you do
    It is all my fault
    Because I am a sucker
    In love.
     
  2. 06thenewsummeroflove

    06thenewsummeroflove Member

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    Love? Dude you're 13, Stay away from the stuff.
     
  3. dropsomenyc

    dropsomenyc Member

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    Try to use more images to describe what you are trying to say instead of saying it. For example instead of saying the music was said say something like the wet heavy notes sunk through my bones and the sadness lifted tears to my eyes.
     
  4. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    It is a fine piece of poetic expression.
     
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