I wrote this tripping

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by superusername, May 3, 2007.

  1. superusername

    superusername Member

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    I wrote this triping the only lsd influence realy was I saw some transparent words on the sheet of paper but I didn't try to write what I saw just wrote what came to my hand from my soul.
    I can see
    The transparent words on the sheet
    God damn everything on it is neet
    to bad this page keeps starting anew,
    just like a man with no point of view
    time keeps staying upside down with
    No hope of it staying righside round
    Crazy shadows in the night move around
    In ways that don't speek with a face like a
    an MTV aduience that can't wait, for a hero
    That makes a camara cue no good hahah
    This shit is killing you why you wast a 5 or a
    10 to make a smile that lets you see your inside agin
    Can't last without a sitting in a wedding pew because
    lifes times are running backwords into you,
    We feel like a lover with nothing to do when you
    watch your TV hopping to make your dews
    I saw this poem before I even thought it threw
    Just like I see this Generation and the Sins you
    Fuckers can't see without a God under your seet
    Too bad we all end the same otherwise the rich man
    can live agin hhahahhahah is my final though as I slip away
    and think of all you.

    If you liked it I got two more and as soon as I get some insperation more on the way I got to work on my grammer and punctioan though I got a devient page screen name 1NOW thanks for stoping by and peace
     
  2. Lady Neko

    Lady Neko Member

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    very LSDish...give props to the beatnicks and Mr. Leary himself. i dig it.
     
  3. superusername

    superusername Member

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    I gues I will thanks
     
  4. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

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    Interesting lol. :) :)
     
  5. superusername

    superusername Member

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    thank you
     
  6. praying4peace

    praying4peace Member

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    it's awesome! makes me want to try lsd even more.
    peace
     
  7. Any Color You Like

    Any Color You Like Senior Member

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    It's all good!
    But that's brilliant!!!
     
  8. rebelfight420

    rebelfight420 Banned

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    "MTV aduience that can't wait, for a hero"

    Genius
     
  9. superusername

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    I knew you hippies would like it more all the emo kids on devient art never like my poems god damn emo kids
     
  10. superusername

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    Thought Id add another one

    Super sight super mind look up into the line
    Hey hey why you stay when you need your super power to
    leave this way
    hey hey hey what you can do what you can say

    Your super minded wasted away I need your soul to fill
    this fray in many ways that pierce the skin of
    a fragial tin
    hey hey hey girl you saved the world in a super way

    I need anything that save this world flying higher then a see from where it came
    Lift it up with awsome streagth gained in your super way, free the world the only way

    That you can.
    Can you O no time to go.
    O no feeling cold
    Criptnoight on your soul
    Why did it go in you super way

    Girl I need anything
    Exept everything that didn't come from you
    Soul flying through a super plane that you
    saved in super way

    Everything that came up just went down when your super powers wern't around
    Hey hey hey super girl go save the day.

    Il keep posting them here in this thread I gues there not all winners this was more of a song I just had come into my head music along with it but il probley forgit it
     
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