I wrote this for class...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by GreenButterflyDaisy, Apr 26, 2005.

  1. GreenButterflyDaisy

    GreenButterflyDaisy Desi

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    Beautiful Young Woman



    I lay here alone

    Slowly letting the poisons seep into my lungs

    And not caring all that much



    I allow this “temple” to betray me

    Bad trip after bad trip

    I can’t give up the fight



    I refuse to allow that nutrition to remain in me

    It will not ruin me

    I’m too good for that



    I used to be so green

    What shade am I now?

    Now I am a woman



    I have returned to his arms and eyes

    Safer and stronger

    All knowing and deep



    I have set myself free

    From these united laws

    I will not be oppressed



    I love myself

    There is no reason not to

    I’m doing everything right



    Nothing can stop me now
     
  2. cassiopeia

    cassiopeia Member

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    wow...a lot of feelings here..:)
    I really enjoyed it...re-read it a coule of times:)
    hope to see more soon,
    luv, cassi
     
  3. joker

    joker Senior Member

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    Seems like you've dropped out of society and taken your own initiative to set yourself free. Right on!
     
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