~ I wonder why the chickens fly I wonder why there is a sky I wonder why we all must die I wonder why the chickens fly ~
Reminds me of William Carlos William's "The Red Wheelbarrow." I enjoyed it. And nice response to Maelstrom, I laughed.
(Yeah), also reminds me of William Carlos William's "The Red Wheelbarrow." Still, I think it's a clever variation. Nice work. QP P.S. Were you aiming for a variation? Just curious...