I wonder why

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by bird_migration, Jun 14, 2013.

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    I wonder why
    the chickens fly
    I wonder why
    there is a sky
    I wonder why
    we all must die

    I wonder why
    the chickens fly







    ~
     
  2. Maelstrom

    Maelstrom Banned

    I wonder why I bothered opening this thread.
     
  3. I wonder why
    I bother to reply.
     
  4. wobs

    wobs Senior Member

    some see things and say why,i see things that never were and say why not
     
  5. To ask why or to ask why not are basically the same thing; it is always good to wonder.
     
  6. skyfire

    skyfire Member

    Reminds me of William Carlos William's "The Red Wheelbarrow." I enjoyed it. And nice response to Maelstrom, I laughed.
     
  7. QueerPoet

    QueerPoet Senior Member

    (Yeah), also reminds me of William Carlos William's "The Red Wheelbarrow." Still, I think it's a clever variation. Nice work.

    QP

    P.S. Were you aiming for a variation? Just curious...
     

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