hey, i wrote this one abt one of my very bestest friends in the whole world, she really worrys me! she said to me 'wait 'till i am 14,my birthday will be remembered', asking and pleaing i begged her to tell me what she meant, her reply scared me but i was not suprised, she said she planned to take her own life. every day i beg and plea, i try to explain that i cant loose her,she is a best friend, i wish she would just try to understand. i cannot loose her, she can't leave, i pray that she will read this befor it is too late. does she remember the days we sat and stared, stared at passerbys while pointing out hot guys? does she remember that secrets i sharred? does she know how much she helped me? she can't take her life, if she goes, i will follow. i hope she might understand, i am always here listening and ready to try and help. i want her to understand, that life is like quicksand, everyone needs a friend to pull you out when you get caut up in it all. i am that friend and i promise i wont let you fall, i will hold the weight of it all, i will find the one wh cheated and show him the damage, i owe you, you did this all for me... how is it?i need help w/my poetry huh?
Very kewl.... Did you read it to her? I wrote one about my best friend, she does to much coke peace out