I See You

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by zaz, Oct 4, 2008.

  1. zaz

    zaz Member

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    On the streets.
    The alleyways.
    Fragile worlds surrounding.
    Paper bags, plastic, throw away items.
    Almost like the people they reflect.

    I hear you,

    Talking to yourself,
    Animated, frantic.
    Waving hands about as if you were creating
    an invisible world,
    where you could find peace.

    I smell you

    Like a magnet taking the underbelly of the towns you sprung from.
    Dark musty trails of the places you’ve been,
    in the struggle to survive.
    It’s too fresh in my mind.

    I touch you,

    As your hand reaches out for the meager change I might give.
    Rheumy eyes speak passages of a life,
    tossed to the winds in stormy abandon.

    I know you,

    Under the thin guise of civilization,
    Humanities wounds are passages of your lives.
    At any moment you could be where I am,
    And I could be where you are.
    Twisted fate wraps her fingers about us,

    Tightly.
     
  2. peaceful-lady

    peaceful-lady Member

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    :) wow...
    that is certainly a powerful first post..
    and a beautiful piece of writing.
    as I read it, it took me there..
     
  3. zaz

    zaz Member

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    Thanks, like the image, from earth we come to earth we go, sweet. All thats left is water.
     
  4. mystik_lilac

    mystik_lilac Super Moderator Lifetime Supporter

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    Very beautiful....
     
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