Hypocritical World

Pray before God,
beg for forgiveness,
worship an unknown being.

Maybe there is a God
out there but does he care...

look around you
pick up a newspaper
watch the news

what do you see...
discrimination, hate,
slavery, war, crime, death

if God really cared
if He really loved us
would He allow us to
suffer such fates as these.

You tell me?



yea i know i break my lines way too much but i think this one is better that way...u tell me? tell me wat u think

 

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i kno theres no god...i was trying to convey the hypocracy of the church...some people think that there is one and i was trying to show their error. if u had read my profile hun u would have known that im atheist

 

....And if he is a supreme being who doesn't seem to care, then why call him a GOD?

Fuckin A lass, that all still stems back to the ancient greek ages...

And once again I'll ammend, good write!
Keeps the mem banks living on.

Haha, I wrote a pretty harsh song criticizing the masses I've been with at church on easter, cuz my ma's a friggen die hard christian hippie...
It's called, "The Congregation".

Ending sentiment,
Gods don't put people through misery,
People with Gods put people through misery.

 

exactly my point...almost my entire family are catholics...being a catholic for most of my life and going to catholic schools have taught me of the hypocracy.

I believe the same

 

love the poem, as usual

 

I think it Sucks

The hypocracy, not the piece

 

The piece is great, and I think you are very brave for taking it public.
I happen to agree with the sentiment 100%.

Nice work.

 

sounds a bit familiar, I like it. It's kind of a shortened version of my "We Are An Evil, A Demon", either way, I like it.

 

Ha, dude my best friends' entire family is catholic and that's why he's an athiest. Works great.

Aside from rag-a-holism,
My religion is stated in another section. Works great!