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This is Adil...then

Alo, you invited me to have my ups
on yours, but baby i need more directions
Just love and adore I do for you in this
small town with bones of sceletons rising
from the hills and cemetery s from the
past centuries..
I got high now but eyes of their ancestors
rised in them and it s hard to say I m gay
to dead people indeed, can t you see
I need a warm hug and i will wub on our
pleasure trip,,
Adile now fall on me and depend on my
fresh meat...

 

Adil
Like a musein you called me on the minaret
to the sound of allah speaking of love..
If Muhamed won t come to a young, youngster will come to him
High is ok, but you are no god so i fear i fall down
It s a high ground to contemplate on love..
So sorrow comes to my inside and you disappear
from the mosque just when I changed my religion
TO your religion, dear..
I m godless now and loveless.
and it reaps my inside, so i cry you know now
I will die and love will hide
No I ain t blind
I KNOW I SAW YOU AND KNOW YOURE STILL ALIVE.

 

Adil s history

Oh god you did walk into the place with dinamic
of an wild afro animal and made an instant impact on my
wild sexual behaviour towards intuition of that kind..
and made me grind wild with house beats and noises
and i wasn t high thanks god and i coul see you clearly
and your walk galore..
Ah beat that floor and jump on up and down, beat that floor
and beat all those i dont adore.
Yes it s clear that search has ended in this nest or as some
normal people call it a hole..
It s dinamic i love and you don t have a problem i know
what you want, it is me, nice and alone, not down among
no more..
Crocodille hunters are after us but than before us they know
we will kill them before they say go u..
:X

 

english's a bit rough, but the voice's unique.

 

SET down
Aah, and rocks fell on me
you couldn t get near me
Blood turned it into
a dream
My last dream of you
You could fly too, in my belly
you dreamt of me
feeling empty and
full of apathy
did deserve it cos i
fell in love for you
Did you continue to
live inside me and
tremble me with ur
life
now that you re dead
inside of me

 

I agree with Van on these... the english could use some cleaning up, but behind that there's some great stuff here! keep em coming!

 

crazy
creep

I met a guy who
wanted a quicky
with the girl i knew
and they didn t do it
or they did, who cares
but he was singing
i m a creep to me
and a boy with a
radiohead t shirt
was coming toward us
is that the effect of the
radio, everybody can
say bad things if
they don t get it wet?
also don t care
he talked to me
said write me
i looked at him
my eyes said
are you crazy?
please sing it back
to me

 

Siobhan


Like one eye has been
enough for that time
i ve never seen
what i will
see..
again in the past..
i will see the past again
but it will never come back
But that one eye is enough
for come back
keep on
you are as close as she is
isn t that cruel
one chance with you i got
but he other eye your
mama caught
our destiny in the eye
i didn t saw
but the pirate name
sayes it all

 

crazy creep is tops!
good stuff, mate,
keep it coming

 

Marriage


put me down
beneeth clothes
run me over
with the train of kisses
and make that train
run in circles
like the
ring you ll give
to me
overdose me with love
clone in the home
in the city
on your working place
in nature
and
i ll be your
boomerang

 

Please


He didn t want to talk to me
Ok I see, it s obvious why
But tell me why you don t ?
What do you want?
I m ok with that it s not me
Something tells me you re not so sure
People will hue
Now tell me..
No?
Who s that with you
Whose that boy
I know you don t want himm too
It s easy to tell me that
Words are proof
Scared of something
I ll be that too
You ll be scared of me too
Let them touch me you ll see
Kick them is no hard thing to do
But what bout me and you
One day u ll be sure
this town s a fur
i ll need it no more
when studying s through
tell me you want me
i ll tell that
when this is thru

 

lost friends


Gledaš me posrnulo
bojiš se uvijek
ja nisam tvoj prijatelj
dušo to
traje zauvijek

izgubljeni prijatelji

AGain that pointless smile
said he wasn t your friend
i hear his words from you
don t realise
boring life
gets you together
boring him
boring you

 

yes! crazy creep's got that vibe I love so much... off kilter style that has direction but seems to be rambling. Great great work. My favorite I've read of yours!

 

I especially like the poem above, as quoted by Fulmah, and also the poem titled 'Marriage'. The style is very crazy and off - beat, probably because of your translating the language rather than your actual style, but who knows? I feel as though these poems are written from a female pespective even though your signature says you are male...I have no idea why I think this, it's just an instinctive feeling *shrugs*

Take care and keep writing!

 

hi hi hi, yes i m male, gay..well it s not the translation thing, people here on my native language posts say that they read my just because of the style :& and how i use words. I m very funny person, semi lunatic ..sometimes i think i don t have something important to say and then the sentences are clear and understandable in traditional point of wiew..
thanks a lot for your posts.. next one, inspired by dark angel show, kate bush..yep and saturdays classes where we ll make greek puppets for puppet show

green and black

oh sabbath and morning
how it sounds
it s back
the coldness
it s back
the working day
it s a week s day
teach us young
call you aged
and don t say no more
why don t they
know we are gods
i ll be in the woods
alone
and trees will
before the necessity
the times
when we all see them
on tv while they are burning
i ll run
before to tell them
i love you
you re not all the same
i know even the dog s
faces, for they can remember
us
why wouldn t i rec. them
just lean on me you old
for u have that power
one goal
to make me a god
in wood
and teach me
how your beard
and roots of trees
have the same meaning
that you all see us

 

-green and black- almost made sense to me... I love that feeling when looking into a world that's not like anyone elses, and while nobody's world is quite the same, some are just way out there, and those are the fascinating ones. Perhaps it's a translation issue, but I don't really care; it's better this way, imo

 

Loved Marriage!!!! Boomerang, I had that word in me head for days....and this is where is surfaces. Excellento.

 

thank you people
now i can t even start writing before i say thanks

went thru

i ll smoke all these cigarettes
cause of you
thinking what i could write
about us two
well you never made me blue
never seemed to disapprove me
made me motion to look u
better 2
meke me feel one is the number
not pointless like they do
i shake again
feel i could faint
faint
again
i ll need to ask for an
answer
before i lose you like i did
in other guys
my fear
lost
before
you

 

i like this one. they are all good. your writing makes me think of chaos, rhythm and passion. lots of passion!

 

tnx

hounting

an attitude
one life
and the rest is
not up to you
who said it won t
happen
they ll hount you
prepare you
and cook you
like all those
animals
they used to
hount too
flesh is what you got
is flesh realy what you
want

viva vegetarianismo