I want honest opinions about my latest poem. Absolve me, find my sin, cleanse my soul. Allow myself to find, that dark hidden sin dirtying my soul. The truth will save me? Absolve me, In my knees, eyes to heaven. Wash away the wrongness of my feelings, the evil of true human nature. Absolve me, make me unnatural, right cleanse my soul make me normal. God of Hypocrisy, God of nothing, Absolve me.
Divide "myself" into 'my self' or choose 'me'. The line "In my knees" makes no sense: two possible alternatives would be: 'on my knees' & 'in my need(s)'.
