for all here alive be free to live.... each step i knee first, only to see me. the flow of life entering my heart. beat after beat i learn,forget and fly washed upon the broken sands. never noticed the warning tides. waves of emotion lifted my mind. now to let it fall, all the tears blinded. me... often steps have led me on, on over many roads of thoughts. never willing to agree,pass the questions. fled from yesterday,to today from my tomorrow..led on. myself on. fever hurts my soul,burning rays fill my head. again. temper flashes,a fallen vision gone. heart murmers this lovers song. many forgiven ,only while falling,forgiven. i hope im one.. i hope im the one. each step i question ,i tread with care, the feel of sunlight entering my life. ray after ray, i have learnt to forget.... while combing the sands , i remember... thank you love n peace from saff.. be whole always..
Wow, Saff, you are quite a deep thinker. Keep those words of wisdom rolling off your pen! This was great. Peace, Moonjava
thank you both for reading these words. what a journey our paths may take us on how we have so much to learn .. only to find ourselves . love n peace from saff.
Thos were by far the deepest thoughts in this poem. You have depth in ur poems that most couldn't concentrate on, but I enjoy this piece especially well. I noticed that most here have great descriptions, that can mold an object or scene in my mind as well as urs do, keep up the work, don't loose the feeling to write. peace
