for all torn memories, pieces fell upon dirt. thoughts wonder,what was she feeling ,the moments gone..... stop ,look listen does repeat upon the ear i surrender. knee deep ,sand filled souls. gone footsteps,washed over. tired smile,weeping down. sun play, my hearts open undone. tread softely,i can wade. swimming,past depths yet,not to my grave. eyes sharp,body warm rolled away once more. i surrender i open my world tears fell,years mentioned. weeping not ,no more... thank you lovenpeace from saff... be not afraid to view your years its moments you collect...................
for all who question....... bitten more,can not chew a drip may slide upon the chest,what secrets to let out... tongue licking ,moist lips below the vision blurs. heart melts,passion burns... body craves motions, moving rhymes.... running within a swollowed heart,undone i was caught, once torn,once slashed. what is lost ,can i find. soul reaching,the bodies pain, mind forcing thoughts.to vanish away. lay with me,once again. i flicker,as his breathe blows across my flames. dance high upon the ride. what stars collect,to view a moons sad silver rays, no warmth for her,only the coming of the day. sing ,soft rays appear, upon my body,what wind blow them in, a window locked,yet pains of glass,bright glory another day....... i lay across the chest,his arms around,what more what more could.. i have to say. thank you lovenpeace from saff how time can fly yet we still have life to live... .
to all tender waters,i bathe in tides washed to shores,far off lands. you speak within visions. sunbeams ,wonderful wishes then it rains.. soaked again, nothing here,just my soul dripped in tainted tears. repaired for who,to see this body hangs within the air,long shelves of light, to tickle to tease embrace. tender ripples will dance on hearts,fallen lovers part. just for moments to be one. feel your cup ,and smile. joined by paths to be known. so gentle lovers hold on, tis only moonbeams shore. wet foot prints,to follow a dawning, rainbow filled echoing day. repaired for who,who ever may need.a simple cast arms to fold ,ones world in pure safety.... thank you for reading lovenpeace from saff each moment counts each breathe has a reason so night to day
excellent collection, saff! your first was my favorite, but the second had my favorite line... powerful, passionate imagery! You seem to have a great grasp on life... it's always enjoyable to read your work; thanks for sharing it!
Really loved the first two saff.. Reminds me more of the stuff you used to write awhile back. eyes sharp,body warm rolled away once more. i surrender i open my world tears fell,years mentioned. weeping not ,no more... I couldn't pick out a favorite stanza on"for all" because the way one played into the next...it made a whole picture. Thanks again sweety.
just catching time on here reading through stuff thank you all for reading these are me,from me to you all all i feel and think written to read.. thank you again for reading... lovenpeace from saff