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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by saffronfrancisburnet, Apr 4, 2005.

  1. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    for all

    torn memories, pieces fell
    upon dirt.
    thoughts wonder,what
    was she feeling ,the moments
    gone.....

    stop ,look listen
    does repeat upon the
    ear i surrender.
    knee deep ,sand filled souls.
    gone footsteps,washed over.

    tired smile,weeping down.
    sun play, my hearts open
    undone.
    tread softely,i can wade.
    swimming,past depths
    yet,not to my grave.

    eyes sharp,body warm
    rolled away once more.
    i surrender i open my world
    tears fell,years mentioned.
    weeping not ,no more...

    thank you lovenpeace
    from saff...

    be not afraid to view
    your years
    its moments you collect...................
     
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    for all who question.......


    bitten more,can not chew
    a drip may slide upon the
    chest,what secrets to let out...
    tongue licking ,moist lips
    below the vision blurs.
    heart melts,passion burns...
    body craves motions, moving
    rhymes....

    running within a swollowed
    heart,undone i was caught,
    once torn,once slashed.
    what is lost ,can i find.
    soul reaching,the bodies
    pain, mind forcing
    thoughts.to vanish away.

    lay with me,once again.
    i flicker,as his breathe
    blows across my flames.
    dance high upon the ride.
    what stars collect,to view
    a moons sad silver rays,
    no warmth for her,only
    the coming of the day.

    sing ,soft rays appear,
    upon my body,what
    wind blow them in,
    a window locked,yet pains
    of glass,bright glory
    another day.......
    i lay across the chest,his arms
    around,what more
    what more
    could..
    i have to say.

    thank you
    lovenpeace from saff

    how time can fly
    yet we still have life
    to live...
    .
     
  3. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    to all


    tender waters,i bathe in tides
    washed to shores,far off lands.
    you speak within visions.
    sunbeams ,wonderful wishes
    then it rains..
    soaked again,
    nothing here,just my soul
    dripped in tainted tears.
    repaired for who,to see
    this body hangs within the
    air,long shelves of light,
    to tickle to tease embrace.
    tender ripples will dance on
    hearts,fallen lovers part.
    just for moments to be one.
    feel your cup ,and smile.
    joined by paths to be known.
    so gentle lovers hold on, tis
    only moonbeams shore.
    wet foot prints,to follow
    a dawning, rainbow filled
    echoing day.
    repaired for who,who ever
    may need.a simple cast
    arms to fold ,ones world
    in pure safety....


    thank you for reading
    lovenpeace from saff


    each moment counts
    each breathe has a reason
    so night to day
     
  4. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    excellent collection, saff! your first was my favorite, but the second had my favorite line...

    powerful, passionate imagery!

    You seem to have a great grasp on life... it's always enjoyable to read your work; thanks for sharing it! :)
     
  5. steffan

    steffan puffin

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    thanx saf, nice work
     
  6. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    Really loved the first two saff.. Reminds me more of the stuff you used to write awhile back.

    eyes sharp,body warm
    rolled away once more.
    i surrender i open my world
    tears fell,years mentioned.
    weeping not ,no more...


    I couldn't pick out a favorite stanza on"for all" because the way one played into the next...it made a whole picture. Thanks again sweety.
     
  7. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    just catching time on here

    reading through stuff

    thank you all for reading
    these are me,from me to you all

    all i feel and think written to read..
    thank you again for reading...
    lovenpeace from saff
     
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