for all who see and read within these words... indulge my state,this moment i bare. upon page,my fingers diffuse. timid smile,eyes within. carry the soul,i hold firm. say so much,reply to this. body waits now,soft rays i bare... intact i feel,let thoughts play. swollen tongue,words fallen moaning. tasted friut,under feathered skies. carry the stars,i hold on for. tainted you may see,gone to far, touched to long,body swollen, waiting ,soft rays we bare.... thank you i have not been here for a while not read anyones peotry so will be doing that later.... love n peace to all be whole and free to choose.... from saff
I liked the sentiment, had trouble getting the right flow on it. Reading it aloud helped alot. Liked the first stanza the most. Thanks hun!*~
7 Angels" I set out from galio thats were I saw him thier the fog came down before me the air was barely thier shadows seemed to dance In a frightning kind of way he tried to invite me in but it was hear that i wanted to stay the first angel took me by the hand led me threw a road of stone I watched as they put scores on the beast burnt its flesh down to the bone the next two were like pools of blood killed the lives with a massive flood from the pool your lives I drank He said its what you and I deserve.
ok Coldsunn. You are shameless. Well done. Good for you. Now pick up your shit and never dump it in someone else's thread again. Or at least have the savvy to create something new, rather than posting the same thing twice..... *shakes head* Saff - this was gentle...diffuse fingers I like. Like the way you're playing with words, and light.
