hi poem to add to ,simple........

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by saffronfrancisburnet, Mar 4, 2005.

  1. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    for all,these words
    sorry not been here awhile
    will be reading your poetry ...
    heres mine.............................


    simple to feel,yet torn in half
    not paper ,falling tears that
    start.
    pen to hold,like cup for thirst.
    yet balance all,how... who on earth.
    not body touched,upon a bed
    to finger hopeful thoughts.to come.
    a willow branch dances under sheet.
    a world of fire,water souls so deep.
    so simple life,tasted so sweet,
    to open eyes,the vision to see.
    not heart to throb,upon my breast
    to hear the beats,to be so close.
    inside the wounds others HOLD.

    simple,yet life what and when...
    to feel the delicate rays so soft,
    fillings so ripe,within the eden
    that we stand,simple to love...
    while fluids wave upon your bed
    moan for fruitfulness again.
    lick those wounds,the head hold
    so high.
    for all we know ,is all implied...
    simple to feel,not torn in half.
    being whole is what lifes.....
    for...


    thank you

    please follow on here or add your words


    love npeace from saff
     
  2. kidder

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    'simple,yet life what and when...
    to feel the delicate rays so soft,
    fillings so ripe,within the eden
    that we stand,simple to love...'
    Those were my fav lines, saffron. Plump and rich and gourd-like. Good to see you back!
     
  3. hippychrome

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    To feel a heartbeat upon a chest + hug to share a being as a whole in a bubble of love, a finger gently stroking ones cheek and a gentle kiss upon my neck + to grant one to another with channelled energy of pure love ... I hope all can feel that within our lives with effection + I hope to feel it once more.
     
  4. spoon

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    like the wind
    life changes
    don't wait for it to move you
    stay in front
    chart your own destiny

    the things you can't find are always where you haven't looked
     
  5. hippychrome

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    I stand in the wind, rain, snow + cold + bear it all,
    clarity comes when we are at our lowest,
    I look inside + what do I see?
    An empty space where love + caring once was.
    I fear it has been lost + bear the void, but throw my heart out with healing in hope that the one that filled my heart is alright and well.
     
  6. hippychrome

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    And where does one look? In the ashes of one memories, or in the present to where some of us are blind to the obvious?
     
  7. spoon

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    are you one with the mirror.
    one and the same.
    then you shall find what you seek.
    if you are one with the mirror.
    in a place not yet looked.
    as you proclaim.
     
  8. hippychrome

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    Yes, I see myself + being as a whole in the mirror,
    I see myself + give strength, energy of light + love to myself as a whole.
    But I need another of the same heart in my life, or lonely I feel as though I'll shrivel and die.
     
  9. saffronfrancisburnet

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    wow to all and here i write for all ......

    simple to see the reflection,
    in eyes who stare at me
    yet not inside but through me.
    simple to devle ,not to deep
    to empty the life in me.......
    a mirror upon the moring,
    a cross we all may bare.without,
    love and memories,what simple
    moments,to share.

    take hold the face,simple in smile
    its you who seeks like ,myself
    a longing taste not,biten heart.
    yet ,upon the breast the life
    starts.
    no knowledge left to undo,the pain
    just how simple ,it all really
    may be.......
    love in this life,be warned it comes
    it goes.
    now.explain to one who burns
    the passion twists turns.the
    broken man yet woman fall too.
    the play on fears a mind to undo.
    so take hold the love,not just the word
    palm open for beauty ,fold the skin
    smile for the paths we tread,
    are paths ones for many.....more.




    thank you for all the above you have posted
    love n peace from saff
     
  10. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    sorry about my spellings

    thank you
    from saff
     
  11. hippychrome

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    When we look into a mirror one sees a reverse reflection,
    place a mirror behind + look into that or use a camera to see what others see.

    But within 2 mirrors open your heart + try to look and feel before the images
    and your very being deep within your eyes and your heart.
     
  12. saffronfrancisburnet

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    so true
    yet dont live the reflection of what you could be


    be you with all you can give...

    yet remember to be aware.
    to see past what may be happening
    what ever we think or feel,the path
    is to choose ,is to realize what is truth
    what is life and what we as humans
    can achive,in love in life...................

    to see the flower,a petal so wonderful
    opening to the life the world
    like the birth of a child in this life
    the fresh new life,with all its
    lives to live or have been lived......
    to live...to live...
    the mirror is all this
    the ripples in the stream reaching the ocean
    what ever the rapids do..........
    for tears and laughter is all
    there in you in the reflection....
    in this world of changing life.....


    love npeace from saff
     
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