Hey,that's humanity

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by marquis_de_odde, Jan 14, 2005.

  1. Alice was an introvert
    Had a room of dolls
    All dressed up in people clothes
    She'd pin them to the wall

    She had fears of failure
    Of falling from the shock
    Her legs became inanimate
    She never learned to walk

    Jock was quite the charmed man
    His friends said he was blessed
    But secrets hide in dirty ways
    He never got undressed

    Dark at night in shadows
    He'd peer beneath the covers
    Cursing his shortcomings
    Left no time for lovers

    No matter who or what you do
    You may live from your bed
    The bigger truth will come to play
    We're all fucked in the head
  2. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member


    this was quirky and fun. it was a comic strip.
  3. ganja fairy

    ganja fairy Member

  4. lover/young_peace

    lover/young_peace Senior Member

    Oh wow, that was awesome. :D It was a bit quirky, I can almost hear carnival music in my head. :p You have a great deal of talent.

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