Hey! I am new here. I needed someplace where people could read my poetry. I need a title for this one. Give me your opinions and a title idea if you have one! THANKS! Hoping,Wishing,Longing I want you here with me Night is seeping through the windows Like a dark and troubled sea. I'm the ship wreck on the water You're the sun after the storm You come out when you're needed To keep the ocean warm. As the night outside is rising The day begins to fall Without you here I'm nothing I'm puny and I'm small. If day just disappeared And we were only left with night I'd be the flower in the meadow With out a hope in sight. If you ever had to leave me I'd simply fall apart so please, please, please don't do it Please don't break my heart.
I liked this a lot, it flowed, and it was just filled with imagery(didn't feel like I was reading poetry, felt like I was just looking at images in my head, except they were images from your head). Title ideas? Hmmmm...I don't know, these will all be shit, but maybe they'll get some juices flowing: "Night moves on", "My solar love", "The setting sun", "My setting sun", "Our setting love"(sorry... ).....
