Here's A Taste Of My Mind

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by AddictiveSmile, Jul 10, 2007.

  1. AddictiveSmile

    AddictiveSmile Member

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    I've been writing poetry since I was able to read and write. I had stopped for a few years. I guess it was writers block or even being too busy. I have started writing again not too long ago. Here's a piece I wrote a few months ago. I will post more soon! Enjoy!

    Where Dreams Are Born


    I miss you when twilight slips away
    as footsteps hush the magic of moonlight,
    and fantasy is forgotten in falling leaves


    You are the only light in these hazel green eyes,

    coming to comfort in roses red,
    flourishing in passionate petals,
    stem stirs, silencing the stream;

    Hearts hibernating, sigh in serenade
    of whispering wind
    When doves pair in flight
    to envy our passionate storm.


    There are moments
    where thoughts linger,
    of lips longing to taste
    fragrances of love

    Beckoning your breath
    nestled in nectar, nurturing
    kisses cascading softly

    over glistening buds,
    blossoming...

    Gliding in poetic rhythm,
    igniting emotions embers,
    surrendering to serenity's calling


    when seconds melt into hours
    in quiet contempt of awakening
    from desire that finds us
    in caress

    when dreams collide.
     
  2. scruuuub

    scruuuub Member

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    wow ! very good ! i love it =]
     
  3. hoperenefeese

    hoperenefeese Member

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    love it, very nice
     
  4. Headlight_ona_train

    Headlight_ona_train Member

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    you got some real talent
    i like your images and words
    very nice...
     
  5. thcinfectedhair

    thcinfectedhair Member

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    wow that was amazing, i loved how you used so many words that were very descriptive. lots of immagery and metaphors!
     
  6. jim kirby

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