Here And There

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Deidre, Aug 30, 2017.

  1. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    A recent poem of mine that I wrote as a way to explain the push and pull when one leaves religion (''there''), and moves towards the unknown (''here'').


    Here and There


    When I was there
    I wanted to be here
    And then, I thought about it
    What was there that wasn't here?

    My mind was here
    My heart was there
    If only the two could meet in the middle
    I'd be happy if for but a day

    Here is really no better than there
    But, you can tell yourself almost anything
    If you are escaping from here
    To get to there

    I like it here
    It is real and precise
    What I left back there, was not real
    But it was nice

    My heart can't stay there
    It has to come here
    And I'll watch over it
    It doesn't need to be watched by him any longer

    Whether I'm there or here
    I've always been the watcher
    Keeping me there
    And waiting for me to come here

    I like it here
    I'm no longer there
    I've come a long way
    With a price to bear

    But such is life
    An endless journey
    Filled with not enough here
    And way too much... there
     
  2. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    Yes, it does. :) 'The road not taken' is usually the one we have to pave.
     
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  3. I am not here, over there, who's there, who's here, I am, here I am, here, there
     
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  4. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    lolololol ^^ that made me smile. :D
     
  5. MeAgain

    MeAgain Dazed & Confused Lifetime Supporter Super Moderator

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    I will be there and everywhere
    Here, there and everywhere

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