Heaven's Deep

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by shaman sun, Apr 20, 2007.

  1. shaman sun

    shaman sun Member

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    We descended unto the heaven deep

    But found nothing but blood,

    We wrestled angels to the floor,

    But ended up on our knees,

    We battled God for the thrown of Earth,

    And found our skin could only bleed.


    What twisted halos have devised such a plan

    As this?

    In Hell’s realm we could at least know,

    And know enough that suffering,

    Suffering’s depth is unknowable.


    We descended into Heaven’s deep,

    Caught in Gods eyes a flood,

    Which we knew not to leave alone,

    And instead erected temples,

    To insurrect the death of a God

    Of the known.

     
  2. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

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    I love it! Thats a great poem :)
     
  3. Justagrrl420

    Justagrrl420 Member

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    beautifully written..thanks for sharing.
     
  4. PoemBased

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    wow... that is a great piece of work. Bravo
     

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