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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by The Instinct, Jul 12, 2007.

  1. The Instinct

    The Instinct Member

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    This is the other side to "She" that I wrote about a year later. Again, all thoughts/comments/replies are welcome. Enjoy.


    He is a person who has burning passion for her love
    A person who cherishes every moment they will have
    He longs for the day that she will come into his life
    A day he will always remember from deep within

    He will remember the day she said she loves him
    He'll take it to heart and never let it go
    A heart that has been closed until she came along
    From all the hurt that's been brought upon him

    Somewhere he knows that she exists
    He can't give up until he finds her
    He'll never know when or how but beyond the mountains he travels
    Climbing through rocky territories of lies and games

    There have been many times where he's turned his back
    Only on one's who used him for what he was worth
    They always told him they loved him, but he knew the truth
    He knew that a special someone was out there for him

    He looks for a look in her eyes so deep that only he knows
    It's a feeling of comfort, security, but that wouldn't even describe it
    The word of love that's inside is unmatched to how he feels
    He dreams about her only to wake up with empty arm's

    He has thought he's seen her on many occasions
    He has even talked to her and tried to charm her
    Only to hear a lie or fall into someone else's arm's
    Often wondering why it didn't work out

    Time always moves on and so does he
    Finding himself in a lonely reality
    That man here is me, it is you
    He can't understand life without her, there wouldn't be life

    He wonders where to go and what to do
    Often questioning if some are "the one"
    He'll never know until the day they meet
    They will look into each other's eyes and be in love forever

    c. 2001
     
  2. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    i voted "dont know" but this poem is really good...it made me tear up actually...made me think about some things that ive done to the people i claim to love
     
  3. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    its a beautiful poem...very sad...
     
  4. jim kirby

    jim kirby Member

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    the yearning for and the search for true life is as old as time itself ... your words have been spoken and written a million times in one form or another. you're still a young man with plenty of time left to find the love of your life ... a soul mate who will love and want you for you and for no other reason. keep looking dude and don't be impatient ... when it comes you'll know it dude.
     
  5. The Instinct

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    This was just my version, I know, I've heard the same words a million times myself...and the rest of it...I've come to care less whether their is a soul mate or a perfect one for me. Love is just one out of a million things in life.
     
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