Haiku

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by weaselpop, Oct 20, 2004.

  1. weaselpop

    weaselpop Member

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    New things excite, if
    Only for a moment, it's
    Worth a thousand cows.
     
  2. weaselpop

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  3. MattInVegas

    MattInVegas John Denver Mega-Fan

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    Haiku usually has 5 lines. But, I liked it.
    I wish the one in my hrad was more insistant on beieg written. It's about friendship.
     
  4. sunflowerAlys

    sunflowerAlys Member

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    eh? a haiku usually has 5 lines??? not the way ive been taught. 3 lines- first with 5 syllables, second with 7, third and last with 5 again.
     
  5. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Fun, fun, all smiles here. Good job.
     
  6. weaselpop

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    Ha! I did it right! :)
     
  7. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    yeah, it's definitely 3 lines, but i don't see why you coulnd't (and shouldn't) add more if ya want to! Good Haiku, btw.
     
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