haiku

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by LSDPsychonaut, Mar 19, 2006.

  1. LSDPsychonaut

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    a noose and a life
    in death's embrace it subsides
    insignificant
     
    LSDPsychonaut, Mar 19, 2006
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  3. Smelly Socks

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    Suicide is always a topic of poetry I can relate to. Very nice work. Haiku is a great form of poetry. It catches your eye right away and isn't so long that you get bored of it.

    I liked it very much.
     
    Smelly Socks, Mar 20, 2006
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  5. LSDPsychonaut

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    Thanks :) .
     
    LSDPsychonaut, Mar 20, 2006
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  7. Smelly Socks

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    No problem. Just giving props to good work.
     
    Smelly Socks, Mar 20, 2006
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