Haiku thread

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Rigamarole, Sep 3, 2005.

  1. Rigamarole

    Rigamarole Senior Member

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    I don't know if y'all have done this before but I thought I'd start a haiku thread.

    Enormous turtle
    Eating pretty blades of grass
    Billows, calms the soul
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    i've tried it, once, no one participated. But I love haiku, so I will.

    upon a sunwarmed stone
    a chipmunk chatters fiercely
    the squeak is his roar
     
  3. LordHelmet

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    the trees dance and sing
    making everything so sweet
    out here i know love
     
  4. EternalHunter

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    First petals of snow--
    dogwood blossoms flickering
    softly to the ground.
     
  5. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    light fills the heavens
    the sun climbs over rooftops
    the cardinal sings songs
     
  6. Rigamarole

    Rigamarole Senior Member

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    I love y'all's poems! Keep 'em coming!


    Bright white light purges
    Nasty things from existence
    Lovely harmony
     
  7. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    the music ceases
    silence returns to the room
    outside, a bird sings
     
  8. verseau_miracle

    verseau_miracle Banned

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    Measureless ocean
    Aware of lifes timelessness
    God personified.

    Bleh, no idea what it means though.

    Im likin all the poems!:)
    Love-Maxi.Xx
     
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    Changing leaves, come here
    That way, this way, that way, this...
    And they just fall, fall

    --- I love haikus!

    p.s. Trippin, I especially like yours.
     
  10. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Thank you :)

    wagging tail
    beats against the floor--
    I am home
     
  11. lovelikeair

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    Boring rhymes abound
    Too many to understand
    I'd rather not rhyme
     
  12. guardian_tnaos

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    dead rose on the ground
    weeping softly with no sound
    the world will not care
     
  13. lovelikeair

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    Dripping, soaking, wet
    Smell of sweet milk and honey
    Oh, I love my hair
     
  14. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    loamy soil
    crumbles from my hand--
    ground of life
     
  15. lovelikeair

    lovelikeair Member

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    Banana Pancakes
    Warm and sweet in my mouth, mmm
    I want some right now
     
  16. Daniel Herring

    Daniel Herring Member

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    A loss; a bell tolls,
    A falling leaf,
    In the Autmn of souls.


    For my departed sister, Dolores.
     
  17. lovelikeair

    lovelikeair Member

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    Daniel, that is fucking gorgeous. Wow.
     
  18. Daniel Herring

    Daniel Herring Member

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    (She exhales; he breathes it in)

    Thanks.
     
  19. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    I liked it too, it rhymed. I had one that rhymed, here it is (it's an older one)

    Rust-red flowerhead
    swaying gently in the breeze
    Food for all the bees
     
  20. Daniel Herring

    Daniel Herring Member

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    I am very new to Haiku

    I may gain an appreciation for this form if I hang around you guys.
     

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