Guilty Dedication

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SweetMarie, Nov 21, 2007.

  1. SweetMarie

    SweetMarie Member

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    I'm drunk and dancing again,

    You hate it when I dance-
    It always makes you cry.

    You say I paint pictures in the air,
    That tell the story of my life,
    And that it's sad...a sad, sad life,

    Empty yet poetic,
    Lonely yet beautiful.

    You weep for my twirling contradiction,
    My joyful desperation,
    For, you, are my guilty dedication.
     
  2. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    simple and sweet.
     
  3. SweetMarie

    SweetMarie Member

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    thanks!
     
  4. HawkinsOrchestra

    HawkinsOrchestra Member

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    lovely images
     
  5. weaselpop

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    I likes, but one question, is the speaker dancing for "you", or drinking for "you", or both?
     
  6. thcinfectedhair

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    alcohol. a terrible way to drown sadness. a good poem though.
     

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