Paperbag that whisked past the pavements gum it saw a purple dinosaur stained with apple juice maybe, i'm only suggesting the elements of Gabriels floating innocence, as he passed past Pastor Brown's empty housechurch- why, the silence with the laughter? Confusicatious bellows/half sighs and every emotive thing. And then he spies he sees he cries to visualise an earth angel, in her gloried grief tears fall like crystal vodka heavenly scented mouse sniffles. He can't die to save another, but- in his opaque sheen, wonders- how such an evening of sorrow can serve utter bliss. Does Gabriel have a heart, he wonders? Basking in a human shadow/ 20 minutes past a suet hour she still mourns for some lost equal. Let me take you to the skies, let me wash your tears away let the pain fall from your eyes and let my love light up your day. Foolish rhymes he thinks and sings Befumbled by such different lust. How can he tremble at a voice but sing about another: confidently confidence meant to... hide hide hide
Lozi, that gave me goosebumps I love it Confusicatious ...... i dunno about the use of that word (prolly just a big word for a numbnuts like me) ....... but i really dig the idea of the work as a whole.
