Frozen Heads

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Desert Stargazer, Feb 4, 2005.

  1. Desert Stargazer

    Desert Stargazer Member

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    Calvin had a chill
    and he walked a lonely mile
    his feet were forming ice blocks
    and he wore a frozen smile

    He sauntered past his girlfriend
    in the darkened graveyard small
    his blue eyes melted snowflakes
    and she could hear them fall

    Calvins head stopped working
    when he laid down for a rest
    his lover fluffed her pillow
    old Calvin earned the best

    She put on fancy earrings
    and she reached out from the Earth
    Calvins head was warming up
    he played her song of mirth

    C January 27 2005 Desert Stargazer
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    beautiful. it's very touching, desert stargazer:) i found myself feeling as i read it. was calvin cheating on his gf then?
     
  3. Desert Stargazer

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    Calvin was lonely, and he went to see his dead girlfriend in the graveyard. She's a lot warmer toward him than the living. He seemed a little suicidal, and it all worked out in the end....My "dead" people aren't really dead at all....I like them to participate as much as possible. I have always wondered why the living sometimes "write them off" so easily.
     
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