from time to time

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by helen-maple, Jun 17, 2006.

  1. helen-maple

    helen-maple Member

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    open pages
    mind stutters
    from time to time.

    watching the blue sky
    wishing for a moment
    to speak honestly with a friend.

    i think of you often.
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Short and simple, yet it has definite depth to it. There's magic here in these few little lines that I'm digging. :)
     
  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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  4. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

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    i agree..
     
  5. Biida

    Biida Member

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    It all seems so familiar, it's lovely.. :) Touches on the way I'm feeling now, actually.
     
  6. ab.

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    Helen Maple I love your poetry
    There's significant substance to your poems and at the same time they're simple and kind of humble - SO NICE!!
     

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