Discussion in 'Poetry' started by StarGateKeeper, May 28, 2004.

  1. Frequently
    My thoughts float to you
    Drifting easily
    down the stream of memories
    feelings swirl into
    vortexes of warm energies
    like Chakras
    into my spirit
    through the Nadis
    of my soul
    along the Ley Lines
    of my solitude
    Recycling the moments
    Until the fresh wind
    of your presence
    Fills me again
    My thoughts float to you
  2. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

    tranquil - I like the circular shape
  3. Thanks... my first post anywhere... I haven't read any of your poetry, Skinny, till a second ago... seems your Poems poem has nice circular shape too... nice...

    I've got tons of stuff, but I rarely share...
    Do you write for passion or publication?
  4. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

    Passion....publication would be nice, but nobody thinks I'm marketable ("poems" is my satire on that! ) Keep posting - I look forward to seeing more of your work. Before they crashed, and were replaced with these forums, I had a thread with all my stuff in, but obviously that's gone now. I could do it again, but I don't know if it's worth it...I'll probably just post new stuff on here as I write it.
  5. helen-maple

    helen-maple Member

    hey little one, of course people think youre marketable, just maybe not the right people...

    but anyways this is a rather soothing poem
    if not a little cliche?
  6. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

  7. i love the :drifting easily down the stream of memories:

    all we have is our memories good or bad..

    great piece so full of warmth for this world..

    love n peace from saff
  8. Thanks again Saff, you are sweet... and Li'l I agree, I have never tried to publish, but I have thought about it... I just don't know where I am in this big world... and I appreciate your feedback.

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