i don't know about "breeze block" but i mostly entirely enjoyed this i dig the makingofmorewordsoneword and the let's-string-together-words-with-hyphens, atually it's obvious you pay attention to your linebreaks i also really like the last stanza maybe the semi-colon use is a little too liberal i think my favorite part for some reason is simply the "needtobegood" makes me want to start a band called The Needtobegoods
