free spirit

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by DejaVoo, Sep 19, 2005.

  1. DejaVoo

    DejaVoo stardust

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    Her free spirit now can fly
    flowers in yer messy hair, and the red sea in her eyes
    clouds of dazed smoke puffed from her lips,
    sends her on a forgettable trip
    bells jingle and jangle
    from her wrist and ankle
    swing from her neck is a kaliedscope of beads,
    no bras or panties, just barefeet
    just close the tie dye curtains and the laws are killed
    and once you get to the end of the rainbow, the air is filled
    bongo's drummin'
    cheap guitars strummin'
    she grooves with the deja vu vibrations
    as slowly burning candles make the night grow impatient,
    the glowing ceiling,
    sparks a flourcent feeling,
    lazy incense makes vision hazy
    she dreams on a field of day-glo daises
    dresed in psychedelicasies,
    she tangos with the tropical breeze
    she has no worries or no cares
    she laughs like a child as the sunshine kisses her hair...
     
  2. natural23

    natural23 Senior Member

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    Beautiful, thank You
     
  3. skyfire

    skyfire Member

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    :) i love it, the imagry and cadence, it has a playful feel that we can all appreciate...perfect description of a euphoric feeling
     
  4. gardengypsy

    gardengypsy Member

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    jamie, i know i've told you this so many times, but i love that poem.
     
  5. helen

    helen Member

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    How absolutly Beautiful!! It reminds me of myself;before I had kids.
     
  6. Bare Foot Bunny Hugg

    Bare Foot Bunny Hugg Member

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    Ruby Member

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    I really love this. The descriptions are great!
     
  8. steffan

    steffan puffin

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    I liked that alot, thanks for sharing it
     
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