for my perfect one

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by heron, Jun 15, 2005.

  1. heron

    heron Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    she paints on bottle caps
    amoung other things

    she prays to the moon
    and whispers when she sings

    oh wonderful beauty
    she is my Perfect One
     
    heron, Jun 15, 2005
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  3. janire

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    I like your poem; i find it very evocative and the atmosphere reminds me a lot of a Spanish poet, Salinas. Good luck.
     
    janire, Jun 16, 2005
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  5. Hippievixen

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    'she prays to the moon'

    i love that line. gave me the shivers :)
     
    Hippievixen, Jun 28, 2005
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  7. loveflower

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    i can't really describe how i find that as pretty as it is
     
    loveflower, Jun 28, 2005
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