Flutter in Sound

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Spaceboy13, Jun 8, 2007.

  1. Spaceboy13

    Spaceboy13 Member

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    Flutter in Sound



    Constant imagery of the green hemlocks across the way

    As the birds chirp a delicate song to one another I wonder, do they feel love?

    Sitting, on this breezy summer evening, the relinquished process of writing, reading, and constriction, has laid me down to a restful spotting

    The children scream and course thru the streets without thought, the arrival of time

    Obscurity, fortified existence, the sky is treacherous to those who have not gazed upon it

    A blue tint on the black velvet asphalt this night

    The moon is upon the horizon, the sun is open to the world

    Stern emotions in this colliding day, the stinging of a thousand more hours of life, melancholy, & oblivious stupors

    A tornado of the populations emotions savagely penetrate the separation in the womb of earth

    In utero, the birth of a new born atmosphere is again the most alarming phase of the new world

    This waste land, this doomed suburb, this round neighborhood, this cul-de-sac of life, turn the other way, we have landed too near

    To the unknown
     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Beautiful!

    Peace and love
     
  3. guinea

    guinea Member

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    i like the line about the birds, my oppinion is that they do feel love, i love to watch birds and if you pay attention you can tell when birds are flirting with each other, its rather cute and amusing, i really dig the poem
     

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