I floated by on a cloud, I saw you there in a crowd, I wished I could be with you, But as you see, I cant, Why? I hear you ask me, I am the spirit of the day, I am always there in every way, I long to be on the inside, I am sick of being on the outside, I look at thee, you dont see me, Why? If only you could see me, If only I could be, like you. This is one of the first poems I wrote when I was 19, its always been my favourite, Please tell me what you think, even if you dont like it! If people like it, I will be pleased to post more of my poetry and storys!
i'm in a delicate state today meep! *cries* anyhoo, that's off my chest...(lol random) your poem-i liked very much. it had a kinda light edge to it. i imagined the character as an angel undercover kind of. alone and isolated. hum. wanted to fit in i guess. i liked the shortness of it
