Firing Range

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by joker, Jun 20, 2005.

  1. joker

    joker Senior Member

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    This is one of my latest fantasy/thoughts.

    I slipped away from reality,
    Embraced a sociopathic personality,
    Did I care to stop it?
    Sometimes I wished I could've.
    I robbed two men shot them in cold blood,
    Turning myself in sounded foolish,
    I hid out in the country thinking no one would find me,
    Hoping not a soul was around,
    I cried with rage in my eyes from the mad isolation,
    I decided to travel out the state,
    Saw an isolated road,
    I thought that route was safe,
    Pigs hid in the bushes,
    I was about to witness my fate,
    As I roll down my window,
    I hear the pistols cock,
    I immediatly know I'm about to be shot,
    As the bullets fly through my chest my life flashes in front of my eyes,
    I've got what was coming and now I'm dead,
    As blood runs down my face all that was left was a JOker smile.
     
  2. innocentpoison333

    innocentpoison333 Member

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    Exelent, this poem is full of emotion...keep writing : )
     
  3. VanAstral

    VanAstral Member

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    dead and smilin', that's all right!
     
  4. WynterFrost

    WynterFrost Short Bus Rider

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    I love that....its beautiful
     
  5. Wonder Girl

    Wonder Girl rhapsody in pink

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    Nice,Joker...I really like this one.
     
  6. flowersinyourhair

    flowersinyourhair Member

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    wynter frost

    wow thats freaky you so look like a girl that
    was in my class in college although she was 25
    your not her sister are you her name is Kat Gollick.
    but your probably from America arent you lol
     
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